All Comments on 'A Submissive Summer in Spain Ch. 01'

good start. Please some more teasing, humiliation, spanking for the guy

Nice one, keep writing. Maybe more spanking and playng with his butt.

It's men that are turned on by sight, not women.

An excellent start! So MANY stories are getting boring and repetitive! Keep going!

Good story. I hope you keep writing

This is a story worth continuing!

Good story, keep writing! I think it's the reversal of power that makes CFNM interesting. These women are turned on by the power they have to make the naked male do their bidding. It's also interesting to read about the way he FEELS about being manipulated - shame, embarrassment, extreme turn on etc. Please write the next episode.

Interesting premise.

But sex -- such as it is with him jerking himself off -- is seriousy rushed.

And getting an editor/proofreader would be a big plus.

Three stars.

Decent premise.

But too much verbal stuff and not enough physical stuff.

No conversations about whether he liked their bodies? And what about them? Their asses? Breasts?

Once they got his masturbating they never had him slow down and/or stop. They never had him play with his balls.

They never had him edge himself. What was the rush to orgasm?

Three stars.

Hot story and so well told!

Cheers

SAGE