All Comments on 'A Sub's Heartfelt Punishment Ch. 01'

by Grayeyedsub2

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Missed opportunity

At times this story jumped leaving me wondering if I'd missed something. Some parts would have been a lot more fun with a lot more detail.

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