All Comments on 'A Suburban Shift Pt. 02'

Starting to think we'd never get an update. Well done!

Very nice; looking forward to Chapter 3

Loved reading every word of this sexy story. I hope there's more soon.

I have loved both chapters so far, you are so descriptive in the setting of the love scenes. Please please continue, I hope that there will be a lot more chapters, maybe Maddie will seduce Marci

Does not get any better than this!! Hope this story never ends. 😋😋😋😋

I sure hope that you will keep writing lots of more chapters and long one's too I hope Alex will be able join in the fun with candy too. I found the first two easy to read. Great work

I feel at times I'm with them! The descriptions are so vivid. For some reason you've created sympathy for the man. There's no clichéd man hater, so I hope in future chapters he sanctions her bi-sexuality and also that Marci is brought out of her shell.

...and that is all too rare for quite a few of the ones I read on here. I agree with other comments that the men are treated sympathetically and not with some cliched trope about them being boring, wife beaters, too rough, hairy, etc. I too go with the hope her bisexuality is accepted by Mike and that Marci opens up her horizons and her legs to the possibility of bi-sexual fun. There's a warmth about these characters that makes them stand out. Thank you.

Even better than the first part. I was hoping to hear more from “Candy!”

Wow, very well done and extremely exciting! ;->

Amazing follow up! I wish you would have kept writing. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. This has me hot, hard and horny!

Two more chapters !

Loved it...premise and detail and everything else. You write better than most, but after writing thousands of words in my 52 years as a communicator I offer the following as constructive criticism. Proofreading and editing would have caught a few easily corrected lapses in usage and grammar...and please must you repeatedly use the word "then" as the second word in a sentence? As a card-carrying member of the grammar police it got to be very tedious. Your narrative was great and the reader assumes that the next line is subsequent to the previous few lines. Don't stop writing.