All Comments on 'A Succubus Hunts Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

God the jumping between perspectives is so rough I want to know what’s happening to both so badly. Can’t wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story since the beginning, but this chapter is too short (maybe one more meaningful page would be great) or the next chapter comes in a few days.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love this story so much! The pacing of the character development and reveals of the broader supernatural world are incredible. I love that it feels very well-planned--threads and details brought up earlier come back in interesting ways and there's a real feeling of realism around people's behavior that is missing from a lot of supernatural stories on here. Plus the smut is very hot (^_-)-☆

I don't mind the short chapters, hope you keep going with whatever pace makes sense for you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Every new chapter is a gift. Very happy that you're still writing.

As usual no matter the length it still feels too short. I wish I had the self control to let a couple chapters pile up so I can binge them. Now I have to impatiently wait for the next. Curious to see how it all plays out! -Spider

sarakoessarakoesabout 1 year ago

Thanks for the amazing story <3!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very good story, looking forward to the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This story is amazing! I hope you will pick it up again soon.

MigbirdMigbird12 months ago

Simply want you to continue because you’re writing around the characters and storyline so very good. As a near hopeless romantic have my preference viz. outcome but am good with where you take your stream.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I hope this ends with Amy thralled. Please continue the story.

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Hi, I'm Ash! I write about monsters, demons, and other deliciously scary things. Most of my stories feature corruption, mind control, and transformations, and I put a lot of work into building believable settings and characters. My goal is for you to come for the smut (pun int...

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