All Comments on 'A Succubus's Playground Ch. 03'

by wildflower2176

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WhackdoodleWhackdoodleover 4 years ago
This makes no sense.

A rapist doesn’t care about age, morality or any of the usual conundrums facing us. He, or she, only cares about getting caught.

So when you use a rapist to set the moral tone, you ruin the consistency, the flow of the story. Because your rapist has to work within the confines of Literoricas rules, it imposes a false set of morality: much like a movie producer who will only seduce over 18 year old women.

As a result, your story is simply words on a page. Boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
to guy above

the non-con is clearly listed. if you don't like non-con don't read non-con!

crazifootballguycrazifootballguyabout 2 years ago

GREA STORY LINE KEEP HIM SQUIRMING

AND HOPE YOU CAN GET BECKYS HUSBAND INTO THE ACTION

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