by Turbidus
i read the first version and while I enjoyed it this one was wholly more enjoyable.(the ending didn't suck)
Great story kept me hard the whole time . Hope you write another chapter soon.
I think the couple and he should play till he goes to college. more please...maybe a visit over break!
I liked the story, though I tend to prefer a quicker move to the action. This story was very nice, I especially liked where the button jeans guy told the other pushy guy to take a hike. :)
freaking hot I had my fingers sliding between my 501 button fly all the way thru this hot story 5 stars all the way wish nick had worn his ck tighty whitey's tho size 28 mmm just a great story