All Comments on 'A Summer of Slow Transition Ch. 01'

Going to wait with baited breath for the next installment. Just pure arousing enjoyment.

Love where this story is headed. Keep it up!!

You have the beginning of a very interesting story. I like the way you're introducing the characters to us, I feel like I'm getting to know them personally. Good job ! Looking forward to more from you and this story. Can't wait !

Looking forward to part two ...

I love the charactor buildup. You have a gem of a start. Looking forward to the next step in the seduction of "Charley"!!

I enjoyed your work.

She insisted they were a "B" cup, they looked more like a small "C" to him.

This is what eroticism has fallen to.

One of the most erotic and stimulating stories on Lit. I should know because I'm afflicted with ED due to cancer and I got a tingle. Also the stories are very well written and executed tastefully.

Keep writing.

5+++

are so beautiful and if she does loosen up Charlie might enjoy life more also

I'll read more but for now this is promising. Good writing!

The author has done very little if any research on life in Britain in the 1960's.

Too many American words used that just make the story too unbelievable.

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Writer has no idea about England.

The author has done very little if any research on life in Britain in the 1960's.

Too many American words used that just make the story too unbelievable.

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No big deal.

There are many British and Australian writers that set stories in the US with people from the US in them that speak like and act like they are British or Australian.

Lol after reading the previous 2 comments about the author NOT writing with enough British style.

READ THE INTRO!

The story is about a rural NEW England town in the USA. NOT the UK,

Great story well written