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Click hereBrian and I had one more night alone until his sister Samantha returned from camp. Could we keep our secret from her? Now that he had had me, would he even want me again? Could I allow this to continue between my son and me? So many questions. My thoughts were interrupted by the shower door opening which made me jump.
"Do you want some company?" asked Brian as he stepped into the shower with me once again with a raging hard-on.
Well, there is one question answered.
I loved the story, buy was hugely disappointed that there was no sequel. You set the stage for him taking her ass and then left us hanging.
It took some time to get her started, maybe next he should try for sister SAM. good luck and don't forget she is a minor. nice read THANKS
Loved this. Very well written, leaves me hoping to discover that the story has been continued,
Fantastic! I really enjoyed the story and the character in it. I really hope that more is to follow.
Not into coal-chute (renal) play personally but you can't please everyone. Descriptions and dialogs were far more believable than most. Story development and conclusion were excellent. Good job.
Intriguing but the sister needs to get fully involved. IMHO
Just reread the story again as I love reading hot mom/son stories. The only thing I'd change is the spelling in a couple of spots and some punctuation.
Being the anal nutbag that I am, I noticed you used the word "to" instead of "too" a couple of times (My eyes instinctively went to his manhood which looked way to mature for my baby boy.)("I guess it had just been to long since the last time.").
You also went back and forth in capitalizing the first word a character spoke. Sometimes you did it and sometimes you didn't.
Neither of these things takes away from what is really a 5+ star story. Just some constructive criticism from someone who has too much time on his hands coupled with a spelling/grammar compulsion.