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Click hereI looked down at her, seeing her bruised and ill treated flesh as if for the first time, knowing how sore she would be in the morning and feeling the contradictory sensations of pride and remorse.
I shuffled to one side and rolled onto my back, my own legs far too shaky to stand on. Val laid herself down beside me on her stomach and looked across, pursing her lips and blowing out a deep breath of contented satisfaction.
'Are you all right?' I asked, concerned now that we may have gone too far.
'Very.' She answered with a happy little smile, wincing slightly as she tried to make herself comfortable.
'Don't tell anyone about tonight, will you?' She asked, suddenly concerned for her reputation.
'Not a chance.' I laughed, unable to stop myself. 'If I did, nobody would believe me. Since when did a desk jockey like me spank a high-flyer like you?'
'Since anytime you want to.'
This is a great piece for asking the question do you want to be on the receiving or giving end. I was so hoping he would have finish him off by anal. But that might be another story.
This is a great piece for asking the question do you want to be on the receiving or giving end. I was so hoping he would have finish him off by anal. But that might be another story.
... woman would have those tendencies rear during a first time submission. I think it gave Alan's efforts to reassert his dominance credence. I also have my qualms about D/s so I could identify with Alan's internal struggle.
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Strawboy
I thought it all very well handled, if the initial request to spank her again was a little suprising. What an impressively sustained effort. And in a way restrained. I particularly liked the way the action did not proceed to the obvious bottom centred arse fucking but to the traditional place for semen release.
Bbrave says it well. As a man I have fantasies of spanking a woman, but as this man in the story said, afraid of causing too much pain. The assurances of both participants was well done. I wonder if the author will add more dynamics to their budding relationship and how far the submissive/Dominate roles will go.
To me, this story is a little jewel. Two grown people spontaneously seize an opportunity to let a certain lustful desire off the leash. It isn't clear whether spanking was a first in either of their lives, only that it's a first for them with each other. She knows she wants and needs it; he's more than happy to oblige, and knows just the way he wants it to go. It's terribly exciting. Being a woman, I really loved having it told from the man's point of view, saying what was going through his mind all the while, what he found thrilling about it, what he specifically wanted to get from her, and how he made it all happen. I find the sexual aspects of power, from both the wielding and receiving perspectives, to be forever fascinating and hot, and this is a beautiful example of how it played out one night for a man and woman. That they aren't in an intimate relationship together, and have situations in life that are opposite to the power dynamic of the sexual encounter, add interesting layers to this perfect little story. Thank you for a great read!
Brits just naturally have a command of the English language, it seems. Good work. I liked her building arousal, her embarrassment at confessing her unusual desire, his self-doubts being overcome by lust, his concern for her safety, and her encouragement to proceed. You seem to have gotten it just right according to my experience, although in my case it involves my wife, a wingback chair in front of the fireplace, and a rattan cane.
I don't know what other's were talking about but this was great! Definitely going into my favorites. I didn't see anything wrong with the things Val did in your story. I think it was great that she was helping him along. Especially since it was their first time venturing into BDSM.