All Comments on 'A Surrender'

The fantasy was great....you totally lost me in the end....kind of ruined the story a little. But you kept me with you the whole way, nice turn on.

I enjoyed your story but was a bit disappointed with the end. You left too much unfinished there. Will you be writing a sequence? There were enough hints to fill another chapter or two.

Yes I do have a second part to the story already made. I'm submitting it for approval tonight. :) I'm glad everyone liked it, look for more of Neela and some other hot new elven stories by me.

I like a story that isnt so romantic, it leaves out the passion, while not so passionate, it forgets that me enjoy our passion mixed with true emotions, not just lust, thank you for a story worth reading.