by jnw001
I enjoyed the story but it seemed to me to move too fast to be believable. (Just my 2 cents)
The reunion would have been better without the Tim character. Don’t like that the main character’s answer to “not being lost” is to play second fiddle in this throuple.
Hot story! The only problem with this is that three people seem like an awkward number to me. Four would be much better, and I just happen to be available to help fill the void, ;-). Hope you're going to continue this hot little tale. There're loads of possibilities to explore with this one. MLF