All Comments on 'A Swinging Party'

Great story with delicious sex. Loved it very much. It would been wonderful had it been a bit longer.

You need to continue the story at least for a couple more chapters. It’s a good story well written please continue

More possibilities with this story...it is only the beginning of the party.

Just curious how this is incest? Fun reading. As the others state, needs another chapter or two.

2 stars

Sorry, but the story feels totally artificial/constructed -- which for me is a total turn-off.

Could possibly work as a script for a (B?) porn movie,

The only applicable people seem to be Cheryl and Adam, and I can't find anyplace where is states the fuck. I guess were are supposed to infer that with all of the switching they paired up at some point. However, that's not how fiction really works. If the writer doesn't put it in the story, it's not there. It's not canon. Just because siblings are part of the group doesn't make it incest or taboo.

"Fuck me in the ass" is so, so sexci..as is "best tasting pussy he ever had"...Some pussies are so sweet

Not a single instance of incest

your had a brother and sister having sex in the same room. thats taboo to me!! stupid criticism! clever, sexy read. too short, but great.

Very aexy work-up and lead-in to what could be a super hot story about the weekend's adventures! I'd love to hear more about where it goes from here (especially Brad's willingness to eat cum)! I like to think that the action might take a bi turn at the weekend continues. Any chance of a sequel?

I enjoyed this story as it had variety with different experiences for different characters. Thanks

Agreed that this is in the wrong category, it belongs in "group sex".

The only tangential connection to inbreeding is that Cheryl and Adam are siblings, but nowhere does the story describe them doing anything to (or with) each other.

Don't the trapping of the husband.

Wrong Category... :(

Group sex category definitely. Story was HOT, but way to short. Question: if one of these women get pregnant, (Shades of Maury Povich) "Who's the daddy?" Mistakes do happen. And precum can get a woman pregnant. Better yet, what if all four women end up expecting? I think that the women could have a lesbian daisy chain as an added element to the story. But please no guy, gay sex.