All Comments on 'A Taboo Fantasy Pt. 01'

So much to read into. After 3 years if teasing and some touching there was a special day when I arrived home from school.

You left me wanting more and feeling uneasy at the same time. I think that was your plan but I’m not sure it is enough to draw me back. It’s done and I don’t know if I want to see more.

Please finish this story, you have me very excited to see where you take us from here...

Seriously? That's it? Where's the rest of this? Fuck I've read longer, hotter stories on the wall of a bathroom stall. You can't honestly be serious in publishing this and I honestly hope that the wrong file was submitted or something because I can't explain in any other way how you felt this was acceptable to publish. One star is too many for this.

I hope you are working on more chapters. Decent start with a disappointing cliffhanger...

Wow, you actually got me reminiscing of the long forgotten, though painfully intense, trepidation I experienced in my youth when approaching similar crossroads.

We'll done.

ok,so....(dramatic pause).....more of this please

Very good start

Sure its going to be the favourite story of many

Wonderful so far . So well written ! Please do continue !

Seriously disappointing ....my piss this morning was more satisfying then this

Kudos to writer for the theme

Please continue at the earliest

The suspense in the last para kindles expectations

Very disappointing. This could have been written by a middle school English class. I will not be returning. Doesn't even rate a single star.

Interesting

The ending of the first chapter successfully surprised me anyway. I don’t understand the vitriolic comments about how it stopped: it clearly says Pt 1 in the title, and it’s been left with a surprise and opening for the next chapter. The writing flows well and the grammar is good. I don’t enjoy incest stories myself, but can appreciate that others do; this has the elements to make it a little different from the run of the mill.

hope you dont take to long for next chapters