by imbu23201
I love this story. Beautifully written, the world building is well done, and the characters are full and real and not characatures. I can't wait for the epilogue, but even more, I want the sequel for what happens after she conquers this world. Way to go.
5* for a lovely ending and Evo has come unstuck too lol.
Can't wait for the epilogue.
Liar. I thought you said this was the last chapter. When will you stop with this boring crap? You could have saved yourself so much time.
I was so glad to hear you were writing an epilogue. I wanted to see if the general and Anna marry for political reasons and I want to see how the God thing turns out for Anna.
Yay! Great ending! I'll keep my eyes peeled for the epilogue, of course, but you tied things up pretty nicely here. For a minute there in CH 14 you really had me convinced that Serena was going to pull a fast one on everyone and turn out ot have her own evil plans, but I'm glad she was pure. Good story!
The range of emotional responses to trauma and abuse was outstanding. The internal conflicts rang true. Thank you. 5* once again.
Thanks for all your amazing comments. Its so gratifying to hear that you've enjoyed the story!
The story ended on a hopeful note on how a kingdom ravaged by war and strife can begin to heal. Rafia looks promising enough to put the past behind them and move on to better times. How Anna will cope with her new role remains to be seen.
My favorite chapter of the series! I loved the dialogue between Anna and Rafia - brilliantly written!