All Comments on 'A Tale of Submission Ch. 01'

Enjoyed the cultural influences involved and her falling into the submissive nature of losing herself to the commands and demands of a dominant male including degradation and humiliation. Good first BDSM story.

An enjoyable start of what I hope is a good tale of BDSM. Eager to see what happens to Lei and her transformation. While the style of writing took some getting used to, it was interesting to distinguish thought versus the spoken word. A word of encouragement: the "trolls" out there will tear you down and complain about your story - but, if they read their own comments, they'd be guilty of what they are accusing you. Don't lose faith. Looking forward to the next chapter.