by FinalStand
A 10 vote should be allowed once a year. I'd use mine on this story - it is the best of the year so far and almost certainly for the rest of the year too.
A really great story - I hope to see many more chapters.
Nice idea, very well written - wonderful.
I haven't had this much fun reading a story here in, well, quite a while. Really clever dialogue and a very tightly edited story. And just fun to read. This is a kick. So please keep taking your meds, or not - whichever is helping you write as well and entertainingly as you are. Kudos!
Your sense of humor and your imagination at work again. Please keep them coming. No one, and I mean no one, on this site does clever dialogue better than you do.
I didn't check the date on this piece of fiction but it does not matter. Rarely does a good story with solidly developed characters also come with an experation date. You've done well with this and i am going to enjoy reading your other stories.
I read the bio on you and was curious who the editor for youe current story was.
Keep spinning them out 4 us!
My editor is the wonderfully patient Frontma. Chapter 7 is in the works (along with Chapter 6 of Mrs. Hardison - I promise!). Thank you for the interest.
types when I was in High School, amazing the Head Cheerleader was Bi , and I just loved eating her.
Great story with twists...just like I enjoy!!!
I just love a heartwarming story and I loved every word. I wish I met a guy like him in HS.
You've got a way of making the characters real and I like the bit of kink you tossed in at the end. Surprise! She's more complex than we thought.
Fantastic first chapter.
asianToy
There's 7 chapters and the storie doesn't finish it just stops.
Kinda weird romance when you sleep with your spouse and they tell you they're gonna sleep with someone else and you can't.