All Comments on 'A Tale of the Technician Ch. 07'

get the earlier story remembered, but it was worth every moment.

I am enjoying the prospect of Craig in this position with his women and his position at the end of the chapter. He is enjoying the situation even while he gripes. You have added more elements to this story with Craig's position on the team and his relationship with Eleanor and her future. We just have to see what is going to happen with your story. 5 stars again and will wait for more

About time!

Present tense stopped me in the first paragraphs.

Sad for Craig. Does all the women he knows are cruel to him?

A welcome to see a new chapter to this. But I think I need to go back and read the previous chapters to know the characters again. You can be a nice guy only so long until you break.

Val

I dunno Lance, I think it takes a strong man to live with strong women.

I've always had strong women around me all my life. And I have a notoriously bloated ego. When I push and shove I expect a woman to push and shove right back. To assert themselves and fight for their own opinions. I guess I was spoiled expecting that women would display their pride and self-confidence.

Since I started dating again, since my wife's death, frankly I am disappointed in the quality of females available. The women left in my age range may be survivors but they are to dull, puny creatures worn down by a lifetime of abuse and submissiveness to the males in their lives who misused them. There is no there left to them.

Please keep this one going.

I love this story. The characters are wellwritten and so are the sex scenes.

However I hate the change to present tense in this last chapter.

Stick to past tense like first 6 chapters, please.

Past tense, Present tense....

I could care less. This is a great story and it is progressing splendidly.

It takes a strong guy to handle 2, 3, 4 or more ladies and handle them where they all feel special. And, everyone of Craigs ladies feel special.

Think about when you were in school. All the guys were only after the girls to get in there pants. That's all we thought about.

If we had been as nice to the girls as Craig is, not being rushed about everything, but hindsight is not gonna help us.

Just learning to read the signs, read between the lines, and understand whats being said. Listen, Listen, Listen...That is something we were to young to do. Craig does this and that is what makes him special...

Don't let this stop. Get Craig through school and lets us follow him to the NFL. With Amber and Jamie leading the way....

Great story, Definately want to read more!

refreshing my memory hoping you would add something soon like you promised.....

This is an awesome story. I love the characters and the plot line. Please keep going!!

Please keep going!

Would love to have some new chapters on this story, it was just getting really interesting with all the dynamics!!

Excellent. Keep em coming.

Don't wanna complain just a reminder, if i had to choose id rather have one for the "new hire" but still would love an update for this.

I've not made progress on the story for some time. If you e-mail me, I can send you what I have done on Chapter 8 to date. My health has been a bit of a rollercoaster recently, but I'm slowly starting to work on more than one story at a time, so there is hope...of course, Christian College Sex Comedy is waiting for attention as well...ugh.

Looking forward to more when you are up to it!!!!

I've been rereading your work, some of my favorites, and saw your November comment. I hope your health improves. I'd definitely like more of this story!

Thanks!

Its not often I stumble upon stories that delve with literotica, and possess the qualities that make me keep coming back for your chapters. I love the characters, the development(some of it totally unrealistic. sadly). But I would like to know how these people will turn out together..years down the road...will it be a group communion thing..separate marriages with swinging in the picture?

"It is not a matter of domination; if you don't challenge her she loses all respect for you – it is that simple."

AWALT. As Betsy says in the story. Women don't go for wishy-washy.

This is my second pass through the story, it's a bit longer but still seems unfinished.

Looking forward to more of it.

PLEASE Continue

I enjoyed this story and even understood the Football talk which frankly amazes me but i have to agree with the other person that commented, it feels unfinished, it got to an ending sure but it left too many things unanswered, what's really going on with Emily/Mercedes for instance..meh whatever, it was a good read regardless :)

Tazzy

too good to abandon

Hope you are feeling better.

You are too good a writer to lose

I know he's bipolar or schizophrenic or something, but he's still breathing, Right?

I'm still alive. I've been silent as of late due mainly because the Summer Break with the kids being home all the time. I'm normally a bit of a hermit and the lack of alone time plus the normal idiocy of guilt, self-loathing and self-destructive behavior has kept me silent.

School starts in nine days. I pray that will free me somewhat from the mental paralysis which has seized me. I gotta keep hoping.

James aka FinalStand

Glad to hear you're still amongst the living. Hate when friends die, and face it; after reading all your stuff lots of folks who've never met you. Probably look at you as a friend, or at least a friendly acquaintance. Looking for ward to some new stuff, and mayhap a continuation of some of the older stuff.

There are soooo many paths this story could go - hate to miss all of Them :)

Really hope you Will continue it :)

I am really hoping FS comes baxk to thos series in the future ive really enjoyed it!

more chapters will be released.

I made chapter 1 a favorite back in 2014 and I come back and read it about once a year. I still love it and live in hope that more chapters will be released.

Thanks

Phil

I mostly like this series, though he gets a lot of grief from the girls, despite all the great stuff he does for them. Sad that the series just ended. A lot is left hanging

I tell ya, I think I wouldn't mind the abandoned stories so much if you weren't such a gifted writer. You get me so invested in these characters that a withdrawal sets in when I find that the story never ends. Such is life though.

Thank you for the great story, dearly hope you can revisit it someday. Especially with that teaser about Emily at the beginning of this chapter, that is just cruel!

It's only been 7 years so maybe another year or two for chapter 8? I think you should let him go to the pros... and probably hook up w/Betsy. Maybe he plays in Chicago and Eleanor is back in the picture?

So Craig's a backup but the QB goes down & Craig wins the Super bowl like Nick Files and has to step up as a franchise qb, w/ 4 girlfriends.

James

Incredible how Your characters are developing in your stories. And you create such lively stories with still a touch to reality such as premature Ejakulation or a small penis. So I really would like to read that Barney gets the Cunnilingus and anal master trained by Craig. As you layer out there are many varieties out there use what you have in the best possible way. Did you ever think about to write the plots and somebody else fills the details? Maybe aided by some crowdfunding? We are missing your stories. However you are the best author I know and I hope you get better!

Thanks

Bernhard

I understand that you write what inspired you, but damn you have some great series you have abandoned. Hope you revisit them soon with a fresh eye.

Really nice and funny chapter.

Series is great, even on second

read.

Great episode, great story. I liked Craig and his girls, I enjoyed hanging out with them and reading about their sexy shenanigans. You have to write what you are feeling but this story is so good that a few more chapters would be great, icing on the cake.

It's not finished which is unfortunate. I need closure lol

I look at this storyline as nothing but vacuous escapism? No real plot just a coming of age story that effectively going nowhere very fast.

interesting enough to make me read all parts of this saga. Started out with some good moral, friendship, high school drama about how to make friends and treat people. Then it sort of turned into just a gratuitous sex tale.

Great story, Craig is still a dope who lets Jamie steal all his women and then has them in front of him.

Stupid Craig, Jamie does that deliberately to humiliate him. All the girls fuck around and he’s left out time and time again. Now she’s done it to Eleanor and he let her her. Idiot!!!!

It’s Jamie’s way of controlling him and he’s just too stupid to see it?

This story was good, but it will never be finished, as such it attracts a score of 1/5 because it’s incomplete. Such is life.

Needs an ending AND better editing.