All Comments on 'A Tale of Timothy Ch. 02'

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chloelovesfurchloelovesfurover 1 year ago

Mmmm bit wordy. If you like plenty of prelims to your sex story, but length. I will be reading what i hope is a part 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love this story

Waiting for chapter 3

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I hope you at least try to avoid using all cliches and stereotypes of the BBC, drug lord. Perhaps at least let Timothy get some revenge against Antwan and give Harold some peace.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Enjoying the build up still. Keep up the slow burn! The gradual corruption of the hero’s wife and (it looks like) mother-in-law, will be amazing if you keep just doing it realistically. Step by tiny step. Hell, maybe get the hero’s mom in on being added to the harem eventually, lol. Just whatever you do, keep up the slow momentum and post regularly :) Great job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Please don't make this some racial piece of shit, where the white guy is a clueless cuck to the BBC. Most guy's, black or white, would cut a wife stealers dick off and hand it to him and not all nice girl's turn into an uncontrollable slut to a drug dealing idiot with a dick.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Loving the build up! Great stuff!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Ok - is this another of those so predictable and boring stories? I'll summarize this whole shit in one line: The wife and her mom become sex slaves to that thick black cock tossing all their religion into the ocean. End of story. Anything new at all here?

The same theme keeps getting repeated like the wash cycles - rinse & repeat.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Timmy will be filled with not only lust but bi bbc urges when he sees in person or on film Antwain with Cherry, maybe Cherry sneaks a dvd of bbc plowing white bitches in Jenns purse and the Christian couple who’ve never watched porn together do just that, they watch and have separate meltdowns, both can’t get the beautiful cock of Antwains out of their minds, Jenn has never found a black man attractive but now she’s never wanted a man of any kind the way she wants Antwain , Timothy thinks Cherry is smoking hot but he’s not sure just who is jealous of? Antwain or Cherry

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn, hope all is okay in your World. Been awhile. Wondering what happens next... Good story!

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I love getting feedback and knowing what presses people's buttons from within the story. 'A Tale of Timothy' is being released as I write the chapters, I have a general idea of where the story might go, but nothing is set in stone. Thanks for reading.

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