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All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Brothers'

by SEAWATER1

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Another story that has been stolen from another writer. I read a lot of these. If your going write something then write it on your own. I should have given you a HATE IT but you got the DISLIKE only because I read this same story a long time ago. Maybe 1 or 2 years ago. SHAME ON YOU !!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

LOTS OF THINGS IN UPPER CASE DOES NOT MAKE YOUR STORY MORE EXCITING. LEARN WHERE THE CAPS LOCK KEY IS AND NEVER USE IT AGAIN.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

"TO BE CONTINUED!!"

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No chapter number = rating of 1.

Monagamous_NowMonagamous_Nowover 2 years ago

I like to know this is 'part 1'...

I will say, however, this was well done and I'd like to hear more about these folks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I’d love to read more I’m hoping for a sequel.

ExperienceCountsExperienceCountsover 1 year ago

Hoping for a follow-on story. Enjoyed this one!

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Well....I try to be a writer. I want my stories to have characters in them. Maybe someone strong and confident, maybe someone a bit nerdy, a bit shy....like me really! I try to think of really unique situations and a few unexpected twists and turns. I may not get it right all ...