All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Grannies - Conclusion'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You need to re-write this one, as you’ve switched up the names of the two old ladies and I can’t even get past the first few paragraphs due to that…

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Shit

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

You were betrayed by the old crone and the nephew waited in the shadows to have a row with you. Lessoned learned and time to move on.

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