by Lady_Lillie17
Loved this story...can't wait to read more. I'll be looking for the next chapters!
OK, we should not be too impatient, but this site is all about Sex!
Yes the story is well written and worth reading, as a story, but we also need some action, though of course a slow build up is good as well!
We wait with bated breath, or something similar! ;)
...but you must take care of distracting little errors that need to be edited out