All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Kingdoms Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Amazing!!!

Loved this story...can't wait to read more. I'll be looking for the next chapters!

AJ64CBAJ64CBover 6 years ago
Good story BUT where is the Sex?

OK, we should not be too impatient, but this site is all about Sex!

Yes the story is well written and worth reading, as a story, but we also need some action, though of course a slow build up is good as well!

We wait with bated breath, or something similar! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Looks like it could be a good story

...but you must take care of distracting little errors that need to be edited out

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