All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Paramours Ch. 22'

the minor grammatical errors and missed/extra words don't detract from an interesting story. Five stars!

Seems to me as if Mark and Jessis relationship is maturing. They get better with boundaries. Are the sometimes really awkward scenes earlier an artistic means to set starting points for a learning curve? Maybe my earlier criticism was not justified, then.

Anyway, it is a compliment to Your writing that it transports and triggers emotions so well that readers feel with the characters and their action. Maybe another reason for my earlier objections. Just felt triggered to say: ... no, do not do this ... its not right ...

But as long as we remember the fiction/reality distinction writing that involves You makes great art.