All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Sisters: Virginity'

by teachgirl1980

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moses6667moses6667almost 13 years ago
great

This was a great story.hope for more

hardheadd1hardheadd1almost 13 years ago
Really good job

Really good job.looking forward to more of your work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Well done.

Excellent, as usual. Will you write more soon? As a teacher, do you have fantasies about your students? Care to share them here?

LaphroaigLaphroaigover 12 years ago
Ohhhh Teacher!

WOW! What an incredibly dirty story. Is it all fantasy?

Please let me know.

Stewart xxx

alotofanthonyalotofanthonyalmost 12 years ago
Wow, wow, wow, wow....

One of the most amazing stories I have read in along while. Very well done. You get a smiley face and a star.

Texguy84Texguy84over 11 years ago
excellent story

Loved the story, hope to see more of these two little whores getting into trouble.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
More

You need to write another.

gondaolgondaolalmost 11 years ago
Stopping point

Good pick, purr fect

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Great story

Very well done. Loved having the girls gagged with each other's panties and one of them doing it herself; that's a favorite of mine.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Good story…, however, from biography:

¨I am a High School English teacher¨ then,

All of the men were focused on my thighs. ¨of¨ is superfluous, verbose

I nodded my head back and forth (while saying no; use shook instead). nodding is for affirmation, not negation

My little sister nodded her head up and down. nodding is used correctly here

She squirmed as he drug (dragged!!) her over to me. Learn to conjugate ¨to drag¨

by pulling her mouth off of his cock. see the first line!

had enjoyed herself and I have to admit I had to (too!!). typo, i hope

Still liked it, but not impressed with usa education - see where it got you now?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Grossly perverted

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