All Comments on 'A Tale of Two Titties'

Very nice, Amy. I do enjoy your stories. I like when you write from the man's point of view. It shows great range as a writer. Keep `em coming please.

I am a small fit old man in his late 60 s and reading such stories is a rare pleasure. You are doing fine. Do keep it up

best wishes

Amy I really loved your story to i i noticed you would switch from the british slang of bum to the american slang term for behind i really loved it for im in my 50s and what happened to Eddie did they have him thrown out of that apt.so Alice can get the rest of her belongings out .?

Pat Murray

Atlanta,Ga.

Great story and actually a pleasure to read as someone can be kind to someone else! Love to read and additional chapter or two!

Please put a header on your story indicating that incest is referred to in this story. As a survivor, I do not appreciate wandering into these situations.

I really loved this story! Please keep writing. You are an amazing author! I would love for you to read and comment on mine of course but....no need. You are the reason I stick around literotica. I will read this over and over and over agian! Wow!

I CAN NOT WAIT TO READ YOUR NEXT STORY . PLEASE KEEP THIS FAMILY GOING AND GOING AND GOING. THANKS JOHN

This is a truly great story! Well told, extremly erotic, and oh so exciting!

Great job!

This is a truly great story! Well told, extremly erotic, and oh so exciting!

Great job!

This is a truly great story! Well told, extremly erotic, and oh so exciting!

Great job!

Great story! Love the milk fetish stories, please continue to write them.

Lovely. Please write more like it.

Very beautiful and erotic. This literrature needs more likie it.

And extremely erotic. Though the situation was very fantasy-like, the writing made it seem real. Well done.

What a great build up Amy. My favorite story so far. You sure do have a way with words!! Thanks for sharing the stories!

A little more background building would have made it even better...

One of the finest stories I have read on Lit, I would dearly love for you to show me how to mix so much emotion into my work and yet still keep it boxer-busting erotic, you are truly the master :)

I enjoyed this story, I found it very tender and sweet, as well as erotic. I will have to read more of your word.

Feeling too old?....Read this story and know that age is truly only a number...Thank you Amy....Phil

Exceptionally erotic...thanks for writing!

And I'm not usually one for hetro sex stories.

good job!

That was some story.

Can we plz have some more of it. I mean something involving them both again or with the grand-daughter, etc.

Truly awesome tale, full of feeling only a female perspective could catch.

niteowl2003

great story, human interest, built slowly to wonderful climax, and with a happy ending. Alice is such a sweet girl, and what a way to spend the winter of your life. I reckon Bob will live at least ten years longer.

subjects. Older man/ Younger woman and also a good feed of breast milk and incredible sex. Nice steady buildup which made it all very believable with a terrific ending.

Absolutely magic... I hope I'm so lucky in a few years time.

i hope to complete with my "Daddy" some day.

thanks for writing and sharing!!!!!!!!!!!

A most unusual fantasy that creeps up on you ever so slowly

Wonderful in its humanity and eroticism.

Great story - really well written - i loved the build up!

Wonderfully erotic and so near realistic! Very refreshing from all the perfect built people having erotic sex. This is much better! Keep it up!

I loved this very much... i'm a 24 year old woman trying to relactate with the purpose of feeding men and women. it would be amazing to feed a man of that age with my milky.

Excellent, erotic, tender and a delicious read.

Nice writing.

and they enjoyed those times. Well done.

Amy you have a great and rare talent to be able to get inside the 'mature' male psyche.

You can tell it like it is.

Good story. Good development and pacing. Only thing needing work is punctuation.

I don't understand why this delightful, little story doesn't have any comments! I's not the most erotic story I've ever read, but it is the most tender, sincere and loving story I've read in a long, long time. Amyfriend, you are to be commended.

Two pages are enough for a good story!

So glad I ran a crossed it. Thank you for writing it. I think the relationship between Bob and Alice is special and hotly arousing. Thank you

What a weird upbringing that woman must have had (by American standards anyway). Incest is not my thing AT ALL! Very fortunately for the old fart she likes senior men. I think a lot of readers here should be so lucky, me included. Writing okay but simple words misspelled. Story line is in left field. Cheers!

What a charming little story! A bit hurried at the end perhaps?

A very touching loving story - and a new perspective on life.

Being old and arthritic myself, it was easy to put myself into this story and appreciate every move he/she/they made.

I think I'll make a habit of reading more of your stories, Amy.

What an inconsiderate old bastard. He could have just enjoyed a taste not scoff all the kids milk. They have been very lucky with the kid's behavior but things will change when the kid gets hungry.

I love lactation stories. Please write more.

Love your stories!!!

A tough story to rate, so I decided on a 5 due to originality. The issues I have are

(1) Plot jumps. We go from point A to point B but how does that happen? How does he go from kindly old man to replacement daddy? Without some intervening interactions, it loses plausibility. I can imagine how that path might work, but it would help the story if you showed us a bit. With that in mind, the story might actually work better if written from Alice’s POV. It’s her thinking and actions that drive the story while the old man is really rather passive.

(2) There are some technical aspects of breast feeding that are overlooked, and also unknown to other commentators. Details add realism and credibility.