All Comments on 'A Tall Drink of Water'

That was lovely!

Elle x

that was such a good and sweet story. im only sad it was so short. great job KV

Great story. hoping it's not done yet. i'd love to read more of this

Ok so he says he is sorry after his nasty comment in her shop and then doesn't even talk to her in two years which I find strange since they were so close during childhood, then you jump to the bar scene where she is the one who propositions him, next thing you know they are in bed get hot and sweaty! Then he says "I've waited so long for that Gabby, you have no idea."

Neither do the readers since you haven't let us know what he was thinking or anything from his point of view. This story was enjoyable to read but also very confusing and there were to many questions left unanswered. So I think we need more chapters.

i thought this was well written and heart felt.

Amazing talent, do us all a favor do not stop writing.

Chapter 2 and beyond please!

BRAVO!!

A pretty good story but I really would like to know what the heck happened to the book store. You know, who vandalized it, why they did it, how many years they will spend in prison, that sort of thing. I mean, to bring a horrendous event like that into a story and then just let it slide, with no further explanation, no closure at all, just seems wrong.

So he looked like a girl! Kinda gross to me...

Where's the rest of the story!!