All Comments on 'A Tangled Web Ch. 04'

I'm happy he told the ex off becuase that was fucked up she wanted to screw around on him then have him run back to her because she was bored also I can't wait to hear what they have to say about the father I wonder if he is alive and just faked his death to hook up with someone else

good for him with the ex. just dont tell me the dad faked the death because he was a crook of some kind.

This a good story so far, cant wait for the next part

Get on with it and finish the story. The father fucked the girlfriend and neither could face thier significant other!! You gave your story away to soon. The girlfriend should have confronted Alex first, then much later dad would have been found. Actually looking forward to the ending of a very predictable story! HaHa!!!

I love this story and would like to see the ex put in her place. I think she should see what she is missing and then kicked to the curb.But Im tired of the dad being the bad guy.Make it interesting.

Thanks everyone for the great comments. You definitely will not want to miss the next chapter. Sorry it has been taking awile between chapters, I've been busy with my real job. For those that start on a random chapter, you're missing a good story. Start at the beginning, you won't be disappointed.

From a romantic point of view, Ihope the father is brain dead oe simply wants to starta new life without wife and son.