All Comments on 'A Taste for Hot Chocolate'

You mean he had sex with this woman while he had broken legs and a hole in his chest sounds a little improbable but otherwise great story

I love me a firefighter with all that muscle and damn no wonder he could work that dick I wish I was in Gina's place

I enjoyed this quickie! Best I have had in a while! Pun intended!

Funny and sexy as fuck. Wow wish I was Gina.

Omg I fucking loved this story, it had the right amount of story and great characters and the sex was so good i felt like i was expirencing it great writing

This was a painful read, very rough around the edges, but it reminded me of when I first started out. Keep at it and hone your skills. Don't forget word play and word placement. Instead of using long winded explanations, try to find a word that will sum up whatever it is you're attempting to express. Use adjectives accordingly, sometimes it was as if you were throwing them in as a last ditch effort. Also, because we tend to coddle our work, try to be your own worst critic and tweak your story until you need someone else to show you your faults. Don't give up, writing is a process. Even I'm still working on it. I'm looking forward to watching you grow as an author,

Cassandra Harper

Smoking Hott pun intended. This one need a sequel...

PLEASE GIVE US MORE.

If a human had a stake in them as long as you said it was, sex shouldn't be on the menu. Smarter person would have kept the beam in because of damage to whatever part of the body you had it in. I gave u a 3 because the beginning was a good start but after that (I know its just a story) it just fell apart. Keep it up!

Hot read but some of the dialogue during them screwing was a bit much.

Ummm. .. it would have been better if your metaphors and references weren't so cheesy...

You at the man being a firefighter then you wrote that he 6'4. Just amazing! !

That was freaking hot! A rough, sexy firemen sexing you. Can't get no better than that. I also loved the humor as well. Great story.