by ZeroDarkDirty
But this story was very hot, and very well written. Hope there's another chapter
Excellent story, so nice to read of a dominant Cuckcake in charge instead of an irresponsible Husband. In fact I gave it a five despite the fact it didn't make me cum, which is rare from me. Trouble is it's just short enough to tease and not go any further. Extra chapters would be eagerly awaited. Thank You for Your efforts.
It is refreshing to get a well written storey in this genre, look forward to finding out about her friend...
The Female on female humiliation gets me off. The other women out of her presence ending her one shred of dignity to at least watch; the younger more beautiful cockholdess imposing her dominance beautiful.
This could have been a really really great story... but the degrading and humiliation ruined it..no need for that crap.. went from five stars down to not even worth voting on
Fucking hot, I love cleaning up cum from a cunt, I would also eat her farts and drink her piss, I could tongue fuck her asshole all day!!!!
Thoroughly enjoyable and I loved the degradation the wife endured and how naturally cruel the woman was.
Not normally a fan of 1st person perspective, was okay in this case, but 3rd person might work better. As soon as the character does something I wouldn't I lose connection.
Would love to read more of their journey and how far they will push her. Loved the little touches, the having to disrespect her own clothes to look after the dress.
Overall a great story, thank you.