All Comments on 'A Taste of Innocence'

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SpencerfictionSpencerfictionabout 5 years ago
Beautiful

Simply beautiful.

pk2curiouspk2curiousover 3 years ago

Very awesome tale .

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

One of the best I’ve seen here. Josie is an incredibly intelligent and well-adjusted young lady. Ones like her are seldom made. I only wish that she’d married before pregnancy, but there is no doubt she’d make a great mom. And she made Alan grow up, too. A beautiful read.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Great but when did Allen have a daughter or have I missed something plus just out of interest who got the house between her parents

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A random writer of short fiction, trying for longer stuff lately.

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