A Taste of Slavery Ch. 16

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Second time thru. . . .O.K. was able to keep up with action of who is doing who / what during this second read. You know, this truly is a sexy soap opera ! So glad you put your talent to good use and wrote this ! That " generosity of spirit pervades this whole gathering.

dlearyousdlearyous11 months ago

What they said. Thank you for this series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I agree Ron should not have been outed - but the story's about not getting it right first time, I suppose. In the real world, any person's sexual orientation/preferences should be their own to broadcast or keep private, their choice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Chapter 16 of this series is especially delightful, I especially liked reading about Lisa going starkers before both her parents. Her rather not hugging her, but rather shaking her hand. I absolutely loved Regina slapping Ron and calling him a fucking prick. That exchange was perfect! Then Ron being fastened into the stocks and used (abused) That seried was (IMHO) too brief. I would have loved to read more of that.

kiteareskitearesalmost 5 years ago
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Thanks for the comment, good to be able to discuss a story.

With Sarah, it wasn't so much Julia's fantasy I thought would break the marriage, it was more twisting Julia's mind and breaking INTO the marriage. I just wondered if there was a hidden agenda at play with Sarah. As getting Julia to imagine it's her dad may in some ways be worse than the actuality. It sits as a do I want that or don't I.

But hey, like I say, more about if Sarah has a plan in mind or like you say, just pushing the envelope.

Her other reason, I suspect is not liking Scott getting what the goose is getting, but again she hasn't said it even to herself. So it was a bit confusing as she was thinking she had another reason at the time, but not thinking what the reason was.

The possibility of a polyamorus relationship is high, but with what status? Are Julia and Lisa part time slaves? If they are slaves do the disrespectful jerks AKA his poker buddies get dibs once a week, at least on Lisa? How will Julia feel seeing Lisa getting some spare when she's tasted the forbidden fruit, but is now denied it.

How will Julia feel if Lisa gets a Master and gets everything she's been enjoying? Does she join Lisa on occasion or permanently? What if that Master just cuts them off, how would she feel losing her best friend?

Like you, I think too much about this story and all the threads that may or may not spin off from it. WBDP was a gentle ride, some stuff made me uncomfortable, but Sam and Marcia walked into it hand in hand. Scott seems begrudgingly to give the experience and Julia is hating having to see Scott with others. Some serious talk needed for Friday and no way anyone gets to Saturday feeling good, except perhaps Jerry, he'll always know he's fucked the boss' wife, irrespective of her 'status' at the time.

Apart from anything else, the chapters aren't coming fast enough, sorry TF :P

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