All Comments on 'A Teacher's Past Ch. 02'

Some might think this is a good story, but it isn't. The title says it all. I vote for content as well as grammar. I thought this was going to be a good story, but I could not stomach reading it after the first page of this Trashy Story.

I thought this was a very fetching story..and did not find it trashy in any way.

I found this a well-written and epic tale. I rate it in my top-ten Literotica stories. I am a big fan of teacher/pupil blackmail stories and this is a classic of the genre. Many thanks for an enjoyable tale

I really enjoyed the story; but having the Queen use an object to penetrate abd humiliate would have helped complete the degradation. And having her clean it off as a sign of total subjegation would be perfect. But overall an A-

it started slow and ended awsomely,,just like a true eppic.

CHAPTER 3 !!!!!

I NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT..

Your stories are great. very good prose. you build what many would do in a few paragraphs into a spellbinding tale. I know some fortish women teachers that will love this series.

Very good pacing and imagination. This looks like a first draft of what could have been a highly erotic story. The many inconsistencies are major turn-offs (e.g. the teacher's not wearing a bra, then somebody's taking the teacher's bra off). They distract the reader's attention and break the flow. Otherwise, a good effort.

Needs editing for grammar, syntax and proper use of vocabulary and idioms. Good plot and good storyline, but spoiled by poor writing skills.

This is the most perverse fucked up story I ever read !!!

The only reason I kept reading as I kept waiting for the end to come and she found out who was screwing her over !!!

I love that your characters have depth and purpose. I'm very much looking forward to reading the continuation of this story. Thank you for sharing your ability.

Even in your own fucked up mind would you think this is plausible as the myth busters would say BUSTED!

My only suggestion is keep up the great work!

all i can say it was hot hot HOT