All Comments on 'A Techies Wonderland Ch. 05'

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Tarheels_FanTarheels_Fanover 10 years ago
Another great chapter

Damn........makes me wish I was a computer techie. Thanks for the fantastic chapter. I'm looking forward to the next one. 5 *'s

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Great chapter

I was a computer techie but unfortunately nothing like this ever happened to me in real life. Maybe that's why I enjoy reading about it. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing.

drmrbludrmrbluover 10 years ago
Picture this

How about a power outage! That is one of problems working with computers and other electronics. You are out of work until it is restored. Yeah, you could have a backup generator, but that is the exception. My own techi work has never been even close to this interesting or fun. Thank you for glorifying a mostly unknown background person and giving him a load of situations and memories of anyone's life time. Please continue this series of adventures and thanks again.

Pete666Pete666over 10 years ago
More please

I love this one and would like to see what other sexscapades Chris can get into.

Chaser56Chaser56over 10 years ago
Hope More Chapters are Coming.

I really hope that there are at least a couple of more chapters coming, mate. You've got a good story going here and you got my curiosity going as to where you're taking the story next. Keep on writing Mate.

priv8iiipriv8iiiover 10 years ago
You have got to write more!

There has got to be more to tell!!! 5 Stars for all off them, but please write more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Bravo!

I love this story!

Please write more - and soon! :-)

I used to work in a similar capacity (not in a fashion shop, though) and I would have been lucky to even see an attractive woman among my customers once a month...

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
AAARRRRGGGGHHHHH the word is Dragged

Drug is not a tense of the word drag, You have drag, dragging and DRAGGED!!! not drug.

To drug someone is to give them a drug, Although you can have a drag of a drug if you are smoking it.

connoisseur29connoisseur29over 10 years ago
*****

Fun story. MSX. It would be neat to have more "series" along these lines. Enjoyed it. Glad Christopher did too. Cheers!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
This a job?

-I thought it was a bit overdone.

-It would have been a BIT more realistic if he actually worked between fucking.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Seriously?

Anony 02/19/14, This a job?:

Seriously? You'd rather read about programming and network design? Pretty sure there are other web sites for those topics.

It's a little unrealistic? I have the boredom of a real tech job. I don't need to read about it. Dipshit!

Author: Thanks and more, please! This is fun.

VisualPerv

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
I loved the story

I would love another chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
it can't stop here

i for one hope we find out just how interesting, the next week gets!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
can I have another

Needs to go on can't stop there!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Ok why stop here are you another of the dam Author's that don't finish what they start LOL!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

Any chance of another chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Another!

Give it another chapter! I wanna see what happens the next week and gave a throwback to football too!

TSreaderTSreaderabout 8 years ago
So much fun!

I love this story, hoping there's more to it! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Please Continue This storyline !

This is one of the Best storylines i have read, please Continue it Mr. Storyman.

HughJardHughJardalmost 8 years ago
Very clever

And a very creative story line. ***** all the way:)

J_Reader_ComicsJ_Reader_Comicsalmost 8 years ago
I keep re-reading

Every few months I read this series. In the back of my mind I am hoping you come back and restart this series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I almost

think this is a little over the line into a very warm place (not kink) and I approve. Thanks for a peek into another of the corners of your very wicked imagination. I'm curious about all of the dark little places you haven't told us about yet. You make me wonder about all of the things I hadn't thought about yet. So maybe you could do a request story .. not about me or us but what you haven't revealed yet. Isn't that an idea ? By the way, I like the way you describe the women and find something sweet as well as hot about them. Thanks - Scotty

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Moreeeee

Please add more, I can't accept the story ending here with so much potential

Rapier875Rapier875over 7 years ago
You're not going to finish this - are you !

It's been over 3 years since chapter 5 appeared, we're not going to get any more now, are we ?

Great shame, this deserved a proper ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
More

would love to read more of this story

Fred78Fred78over 7 years ago
Perfect fun!

More please! I love the twists. More of him and Amanda, with Celia as a slave! Superb

No1holywoodNo1holywoodalmost 7 years ago

This needs to be finished

photokenphotokenalmost 7 years ago
more

Great story I hope you continue it.

SouthernPassion53SouthernPassion53almost 7 years ago
Another excellent story line

Please continue this with all the principals. It'll be interesting to see how you develop this new twist.

FrognutFrognutover 6 years ago
Don't stop Now

Hell this is getting better by the page.

You can't stop now that you have us all wanting to see what's next.

And what happened with the birthday girl?

And there was some kind of event coming up that Amanda was talking about.

JDDRIVERJDDRIVERover 6 years ago

Please continue this story line!!

Rapier875Rapier875over 6 years ago
Its been over 4 years since this chapter appeared.........

.....there isnt going to be any more - is there ?

Which is really sad as this was just sizzling hot !

But what you produced was amazing.

Rapier

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please!!

The other guys are right. This story has much more mileage left in it - don't leave it to rust !!

LoonytuneLoonytuneabout 6 years ago
More

A great story series please give us more

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 5 years ago
Where are you?

You complain about lack of feedback but when people ask you to keep outstanding series going, there's just radio silence. Christopher, Amanda and the rest of the ladies deserve no less!

maxsteelemaxsteeleabout 5 years ago
Please continue.

I enjoyed this chapter a lot and I'm hoping that since you posted a few stories last year that you are still working on this and other stories. Looking forward to reading more chapters or/and an conclusion to this and other of your stories.

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Brilliant

One of the best series EVER. I would love to see how it ends.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great Series

I hope you continue this series. Very enjoyable

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Lots MORE PLEASE!!!

This is awesome, please continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
It was a bit long for me.

I need a refresher on my speed reading course.

I did like the former Marine MO, Jennifer. Very nice touch ! !

KjY

SFi

RRC2RRC2over 3 years ago

A good story that just keeps going. What a wonderful set up.

The writing sets a cssual tone that makes it all the more fun.

Thanks

BlueEyd2BlueEyd2over 3 years ago

I loved the story, and you did a wonderful job with the characters and the erotic and very hot scenes. I really hope that you go back and add more chapters. This has so much more potential.

Thank you for sharing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Fantastic chapters. Would love to see this continued.

mactheknife2mactheknife2almost 3 years ago

Hell you can’t stop now I had just got in the shower!

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 3 years ago

Great story, but the spanking brought it down a star.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Great series! Why do you stop? More chapters would be great!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great series. Hoping for more chapters!

maxsteelemaxsteeleover 2 years ago

You really are great with these stories and this series. Hopefully since you have started back writing masterpieces again, I hope you consider continuing this series and maybe even giving it the conclusion it deserves.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Would really like it if you continued this series

AnyMooseAnyMooseover 2 years ago

Since you've restarted Awakening, have you considered adding to A Techie Wonderland? Lots more stories to tell I would think...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I could have sworn that I'd read a 'later' episode of this story!!

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Mojo648Mojo648about 2 years ago

PLEASE, THIS STORY NEEDS TO CONTINUE,

tms2009tms2009almost 2 years ago

Wow this series is spectacular... I do agree with the others below that this series should continue too

DuncanitaDuncanitaover 1 year ago

Amanda and Chris should become a couple...

EVLoverEVLoverover 1 year ago

You, sir, have quite an imagination. Thanks for sharing.

Tanksdad2020Tanksdad2020over 1 year ago

I wish this story kept going. Man that was a hot read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Part 6?

NeutralFriendNeutralFriendabout 1 year ago

There has to be more. Great series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Why did this one stop?

What happens to Pat?

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Wow…. Not finishing the series?

123buffalo123buffalo8 months ago

It is very good. I am enjoying it very much.

Rapier875Rapier8757 months ago

Yet another unfinished story on here, one of far too many..........

LedmunLedmun6 months ago

One of my all time favorites.

The right mix of sex and story.

MardracMardrac4 months ago

Need more, much more

SatyrDickSatyrDick2 months ago

[22.02.24]

A Sexcellent series beginning!

11/10!!!!!

StevenJayStevenJayabout 2 months ago

Another great and imaginative story

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