All Comments on 'A Tempting Time to Come'

But we want to know what happens next.....

Perhaps could do with going one step further in this story.

This is the first time I've ever tried writing. I normally don't have enough imagination, then I realized I could write my own experiences! I got so excited I wanted to post as soon as I could :) but there is definitely more to come. And many more stories about my different adventures with Henry and Amy as well.

I know how hard it is to get up the courage to post a first story -- well done, and welcome, ForeverLove.

I would love to read more of this -- please keep writing now you've started, and have five stars as an encouragement!

Waste of my time. Not erotic. No character development. The results of the described activities need to be told, otherwise there is no point to this scene

This was more like an opening paragraph. UGH!

Great first story! Very original premise, hope you continue!

write some more