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lawoftheheartlawoftheheartover 2 years ago

Excellent! Two typos: in next to last line, "...two minutes after she cam..." should be "...came...". And, a few lines earlier, "...her spine just from getting fuck..." should be "...just from getting fucked..." Unless you mean "fuck" as a noun. Which is certainly possible, given the story...

The story itself is great. Fucking tentacles. What else do we get fucked by? Nothing but tentacles. They go wherever they want, even into your asshole, even if you're not "into" anal. The tentacles are.

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