by HGLant
Well that's a story I had no idea I needed in my life but wow! Now we need to crowdsource the Hentai.
I have no idea if there's enough of an audience to justify a hentai based on this, but if there is, I wouldn't mind storyboarding it.
Finally!!!! A tentacle porn story that isn't horribly non-con.
Amazing, bravo. 5 stars. I'd buy the book.
I was skeptical but read the whole thing. Was seeking something new and nourishing and started looking around. So glad I did. This is the erotica I didn’t know I needed.
I have never seeked out any tentacle porn and have only read one scene that was part of a different story but this was incredible. I fell in love with your characters and the emotions they brought was a joy to read and feel for them. This was a love story where those involved had to really learn about each other and not just the usual favorite foods or what are your hobbies kind of stuff. You managed a more emotionally fulfilling and erotic story than what usually passes as a love story. As was stated by an earlier post, “This is the erotica I didn’t know I needed”. I am so glad that I came across this as this gives me a new genre I may enjoy although I tend to believe this was more the authors talent and abilities than the topic.
You mentioned thinking this story is far too niche to have any target audience, but I think the target audience is me! I absolutely loved this story, and I think we’re kindred spirits. The sci-fi/fantasy scenario I daydream about most is encountering a being from a totally different world and teaching them about humans and Earth, it’s just so interesting to me. And tentacles are my FAVORITE kink. The only thing that proves to me that I didn’t somehow black out and forget that I wrote this myself, other than how well done it is, is that it’s a m/f couple, rather than a f/f one. All this to say I’m so glad I found this story, thank you for writing it!
Awesome story. Very beautifully written and was so sweet. The relationship between nomy and melina was heartwarming.
tentacle thing talks. might as well attached a couple of dildos to a guy and pretend.
This is beautiful read it in one sitting and almost came at the thought keep it up and PLEASE I'm begging Consider writing more
This was lovely! There is way too much tentacle/monster stuff that is non-con and nowhere near enough consensual stuff!
Congratulations on writing what might be the only tentacle monster romance, and what a romance it was! Despite their vastly different biologies, it never felt forced. You allowed the characters the in-story time to actually get to know each other and fall for each based on more than physical appearance. That was very much appreciated.
As far as the actual writing goes, I think I found one, maybe two typos in the whole thing, which is very impressive for a story this long!
Maybe there isn't a huge niche for this kind of story, but I've been wanting to read one like it for a long time now! Thank you for fulfilling that desire!
Five stars from me all day long!
I really enjoyed this so much more than I thought I'm happy for them. I really hope they can travel between worlds and live happy together.