by misterwho
I can see that you are inspired a lot by the daily soap operas. :)
Also, it was very evident that the mother-in-law would catch her in the act. However, I was half expecting the devar ready with the water balloon to find out first.
I wonder how would the public react if a show based on events such as these was aired with graphic details ;)
Once again, very well done. Although writers themselves are not usually sure what will happen next, somehow I do get a feeling that you have decided what will happen next.
BHai saab, your stories are absolutely out of this world, specially the Thakur and Binita genere. I find them absolutely mind blowing and would like to heartily compliment you on your skills. Please keep up the good work. I have book marked your page and look forward to other stories from you.
Received in my mailbox, which i would like to post here. "I dont know why but i just love ur stories...have searched n read each n every one of ur stories...specially liked the series of thakur n binita...absolutely loved the chemistry between the two of them...as a reader i wud say i prefer the chemistry between those two rather than the thakurain n tht yung guy...looking fwd 2 readin more of there encounters....do keep the series going..."
It is apparent you have a small fan club. Don't expect it to get bigger until you write better.
Palangtod story bhaiyya ..wah kya choda hain kutti ko buddhe ney ...ma kasam maja aa gaya bhenchod !
mazza aa gaya bhai, bilkul sachh hai, hamare desh ke gaon mein yeh sab chalta hai, randipana!!
I could visualize it. What's wrong in it if both of them are liking each other? I liked the way in which she laughed when session started!