All Comments on 'A Threesome'

I enjoyed the scenario, but the story could've used a ton of editing and perhaps 3-4 pages of repetitive hesitation or description of how much of a bitch Darcy was could've been removed and the story would've been tighter. I thought the actual dinner was anticlimactic, as there was little chemistry with Trevor, and Russ was a non-issue; just Darcy's jealousy toward Abbie. I dunno, wish it had had more bang in the end.

I truly liked the storyline, but editing was horrible and name swapping or repetition was distracting. Overall a good read! Just brush up the editing. Thank you!

I loved your story and had me right in the action with Abbie as she blossomed into a hot young woman. Tiffany

Loved the Story