All Comments on 'A Time for Discovery'

This story was going well until

"Is that your...pussy?" Phil asked.

WTF did he think it was, her left ear?

Sam and Phil make a great couple. They are not blood related so incest is not an issue. Why not marry and start a family

they only just got together, now I want to read what happens when they live together and if the parents find out how they react. Maybe they end up marrying or making babies.

I loved the build-up - perfect pace. (To me.)

Well written with sensitivity to the subject. 5 stars from me!

And I hope to see more of these two, going off to college and having a chance of a happy life of their own does make a promising start to a possible series. The progression was organic and heartfelt, being in turmoil over time is something I know of personally so I cherish this in writing even more so. Gave it a 5* with high hopes of more soon.

A well rounded and written story. I rather enjoyed it. I tend to like the steady, sensual story lines rather than the prolonged or realllly short ones and you seemed to end it perfectly and in the right spot with a picture of a movies closing credits going through my mind as I read the last few lines.

The only thing that really bugged me about the story is that in my own mind I don't really think step siblings count as incest once they're legally adults. Weird, perhaps, but true. Would be fun if it eventually ended up as a family foursome if you ever did a next chapter.

AWESOME beautiful and full of tenderness

Please continue this one. What do they do over summer with each other? Do their parents find out? Are they against them or with them? Inquiring minds want to know.

ME, you have to proceed on this submission, everything was top notch.

One can grasp the effort and time spent on getting this perfect one rolled out.

Swan, encourage your man to become a legendry author.

FWW

5 🌟 from me!

What a wonderful romance. Please keep writing!

Good character development with a very nice and normal flow. But as much as I like the story, your sense of humor at the end was the icing on the cake.... :-)

I loved this story. I hope you can continue.

Enjoyed the great read. The story calls for more chapters. Thanks

Great story. Please continue

I don't comment often, but this is one of the best stories I've read in a while. I love the way you developed the characters and built up their feelings for each other slowly.

Please write more stories. I can't wait to read them.

Thank you for this story. Hopefully you will continue this story with more chapters to come, I’m looking forward to it.

This was absolutely amazing and beautiful. I felt as if I was right there with them. I can tell you spent a lot of time on this creation. I loved the slow build up of the feelings and the way you didn't rush right to the sex immediately. I gave u 5*and favorite author. The thing is that this story is perfect even being left just as a stand alone..but whatever u choose, weather to expand or leave it ,just know it was a fantastic job. What got to me the most was the end credits where you showed me a side of your self and your amazing love for your wife Swan! She is such a Lucky lady!

Keep going and don't ever stop writing! Thank you Swan for pushing him to share his talents with us. You guys r amazing and I believe that you are going to be a best selling author. Great job and thank you . Missy

This story was a pleasure to read. I do hope we will be reading many more in the future.

please continue

about their love, passionate, and their bond go beyond for pregnency, like that

Boobis

Sounds like a true story. Am I right?

Lovely romance, even though step siblings are not really incest.

Your first submission, earned a hot rating, but over two years later and no more, neither a sequel nor a separate story. Seems a shame.

Respectfully, I'd like to beat jeremy to a pulp. Good job on that one. I really loved the very end, it felt almost like the start of a sitcom. It really got me giggling lol. And I'm glad no bears were harmed

Seems like your wife stopped nudging you xd, would have loved to see more stories from you.

Great story 5-stars