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All Comments on 'A Time To Work or a Time To Play'

by WileyAttitude

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
started good

It started good, but when you switched to telling the story to her and using "you" it lost some cohesiveness.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Drivel

Were you sober when you wrote this? It has so many mistakes that it is almost unreadable.

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