All Comments on 'A Torrid Trip'

please continue this story

This was pretty good. Also hot and funny. Looking to the next part if you decide to continue this story

Great story, will there be a sequel?

I would to read more of this. Very good

Keep this going 👍.

Keep the texts angle

Next....Don't stop now...

I've read a few of these types of stories and this one is by far the best, different with a nice twist and a cliffhanger lol.

Great writing, enjoyed the story. Although I get why you ended it as you did, a part of me was screaming "DON'T STOP NOW!!"

Good job.

Great story waiting for the 2nd part

Better than i originally thought it would be. 5/5

Please continue with this story. You left us hangin'

Something of a cliche scenario but it was well written and a good turn on. I hope it will be continues. 5 stars.

Liked the story. Hopefully there is another part

Yes, you need to continue the story. Pick it up where they move in together.

Fun and hot! Thanks for posting!

Excellent story. Really hoping you will write a next chapter

lost interest at the endless stream of one line chatter...

Chapter 2??????? Loved it

One of the best sitting on lap stories I've ever read on here. 5 full stars and a wish that you would write at least one more chapter.

Great story, cant wait till part two!

I'm kinda mad that there's no part two yet, this was really good!

This story is fantastic. I love incest, car rides, etc.

But the texts are too difficult to read and decipher. Sometimes it's a double text and you spend time trying to figure out which message from who. If you can clean that up on the next one (and I truly hope there are more) it would make it just that much better.

The dialog made it different. A good read.

Part 2 Can't leave like that!

We need a part 2

This can continue with more chapters. Mom and sis can change places. Then, dad and sis can move to the backseat. By the time they get to their new home, the family will be forever changed FOR THE BETTERMENT of all!

PLEASE continue this story!!!

Teaser of an ending, but hey, it’s your story.

5* at least

Tc

Needs part 2 very good

Loved the story hope there will be a part 2 I want to know how it ends.

5 Star. Really good story!!! BUT those last couple of sentences were not fair.

Loved it !!!!! Definitely need to give us part 2 and maybe more.

5 stars easily. Hope there is a part 2 soon.

The formatting i did to have the texting bits make sense seem to have been screwed up during upload. Not sure what i can do to fix it without resubmitting, but i've got to try. This reads terribly right now and i appologize.

5 Stars! Hot! Please continue.

Praying for a second story lol

Seriously like the text feature interesting play

please continue

ohh my god, so hot.. thank you so much !!! 5/5

Great sexy story, you built up the story well. Only 4 stars because it was difficult to follow who texted what without re-reading. But I see you are aware of this. You cannot trust formatting so use the old fashioned way, prefix texts with a Z for her and an E for him. Looking forward to more fun.

I need more. Much more.

Maybe I just have a really good memory, or most readers on this site have the memory of a goldfish, but there have been so many stories on this site with the identical premise and plot: road trip, brother and sister (mom and son, father and daughter) end up in the back seat having sex. Seriously, how many times can people pretend they're being original when they write a story they must have read already?

I have to say it is one of the best lap riding car stories I have read in quite a while. I know you know the text conversation was difficult to read; but it was still a fun dialogue. I loved the hanging ending. Although I'd love to read the epilogue, it was well done as it was. Good work.

I sure hope there's going to be a follow up to this story.

I love “riding on lap” stories and this was a good one. Very well written and plausible, as much as the genre allows. The texting was a nice element and the conversations with the parents added some good comic relief. 5 stars

Another story of a family with covid, where people (parents usually) have completely lost their sense of smell.

That the children are able to have intense sex and still doing extensive texting, further adds to the lack of credibility of the story.

Except for this fundamental flaw, it was not the worst "on the lap" story ever written.

This one could use a second part this is a very big cliffhanger and I want more and it reads fine to me.... the text parts were fine I liked the differential I just hate stories that abruptly stop after a really good part so I hope there is a part two of this and maybe eventually a single combined story of their journey..

Yeah there are many stories of this exact thing but they are all different to some degree or another and that is what makes each one special this one was good just to short 4 stars for now you get the 5th star when this tale is finished.... please ignore the dumbasses that criticized you for being un original and sex in a car with so many people is possible under the right circumstances people do it in fully loaded busses all the time and doing it in a cramped car after spending all day packing and loading it would make most people sweat and hide the usual smells of sex the issue would be the noise

next chapter

Edit is live! The texting sections should read much better now, I hope.

Plz post the second part it was agood ending as well as a half ending i am sure ur readers want the second art

A good story with great potential. You should continue it with them moving in together and maybe mom joins in the fun

Needs an other chapter

You need to continue this

This needs a second chapter... Too good of a story to stop

Nuce work, very erotic, although a little heated since the penetration. Part 2 are needed ehen they fuck (in driving car ofc) more purposely.

Excellent story. I like a story with a slow build. Yours had the perfect pace. Well done!

WTF was that...ending!!!!???? At least you could have shown us the text from Zoe!!!!

Still-and-all, this is a great Five**5**Star story...would like to see more of this family!!

Please continue 5 stars.