All Comments on 'A Touch Away Ch. 04'

An msub tag on the beginning of this series would be helpful.

Enjoying the story. Some readers might not like all of the emotional conflict, but I feel it adds a good deal of weight to the characters and makes me want to see how things develop. I really hope you continue the series!

Thank you Christian_Alan! I appreciate you taking the time to read the story so far, and I'm glad we feel the same way about emotional conflict. I'm hit with some setbacks but I'm working on the next chapters.

So what is it she wanted to talk about though?

I just read 1-4. This (these) is very good.

Not what I was looking for, nor expected, but so glad I read 😊

Really, pleasant surprise.

Can't wait for 5.

💗fun1469

It has been a year since Chapter 4. I really do look forward to the 5th chapter in this arc. I like the build up and back and forth with the characters. I want to know what Clair has to say that is kookie. I want to know what is up with his sister (thinking she likes him way more than he knew). There are so many ways this could go and I do hope more will drop very soon.