All Comments on 'A Touch of Heaven Ch. 01'

Yay!

I am so glad you are back! Its been years of wait! 🙂

Bro, I'm ecstatic! Glad to see you back. The story is nice, I love your description of Alice, she's not just another fucking blonde with blue eyes with full lips, perfect DD breasts, filled in ass and shit like that. She's real, someone I'd see waiting in line at Taco Bell, with flaws and beauty just like all other women. I also love the MC's fantasies of how she'd be giving him head. You've always have a way of telling male domination I can't find with other writers. Once again, I'm so happy to see you back man, can't wait to see what more you do.

And they never come back. I’m glad you’re not one of them, your particular style gives personality to a character, and is something I struggle with when I write.

Where's part 2