All Comments on 'A Touch of Ink'

by dantemendoza

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hotlover69hotlover69over 11 years ago

well its a change was going well till the started shagging

avidreadravidreadrover 11 years ago

I enjoyed reading this. Short, light and romantic. It was a sweet little literary snack.

feelinromanticfeelinromanticover 11 years ago
just needs a little polish

Good plot basis, but the language is a little off in places and you could do with some extra description about what's going on in the characters heads. Grab yourself an editor and keep writing!

lonesomedove66lonesomedove66over 11 years ago
I liked it

Short sweet and romantic, but it is a shame that Shane needed a prodding like that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

More of this story please

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