All Comments on 'A Touch of Lunacy Ch. 02'

awwwwwwww too short... looking forward to further chapters... WELL DONE1

Loved your 2nd chapter. Can't wait for more. Excellent writing!

doing good so far like the plot and love the characters.

Please update soon. I like this so far

Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!

I really loved this chapter. :) I cant wait for you to write the next one. Just please dont let her loose her fiery/fighting personality.lol. Donovan deserves a bit of butt kicking..lol.

I like this story, I first found it at a later chapter. I find it interesting that a pack leader could behave the way Donovan has. He must be strong to not have others try to take the pack from him. I like how torn she was and how gentle he was after being such a brute when she met him. I think the pack's rules about how she could get free are a bit sick. It does sound like they're in favor of rape if the woman is caught up with and of course a wolf would find her.

I love EVERYTHING about this story. You have skills!

Sometime, during this story, Donovan will be sodomized by a white hot poker.

I'm sorry, he has killed several women trying to find a mate to rape until she loves him.

Are werewolf writers capable of portraying them as something other than rapists? I would really like to know...

sorry to say not liking this Alpha at all, so it turned me off this story

...can't wait to read the next chapter!