All Comments on 'A Transforming Trip Ch. 08'

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Why do Brit male characters almost always be prissy; always diffident, unsure until the female takes the lead? Is it the British public (private) schools?

Supposedly he's married to a fantastically beautiful woman; way too good for him, and he's uptight about sexuality. Correct? Result of British school upbringing? Why do Brit authors think this is erotic? It's highly annoying to keep reading over and over. I enjoy the sexuality between spouses and others, but the continual self doubt is unrealistic and diminishes the story.

Great story. My answers are a a c. Would love it to continue, enjoyed the flowering of Clare's sexuality

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Superb, especially with the unexpected twist at the end.

Will there be a sequel.

I too am in the AAA camp. Actually nice to see that Claire doesn't start to give it up to everyone. The story line is only a couple of weeks old after all.

Makes a really nice change that they stay together and actually love each other. Normally they end up screwing everyone and it isn't really plausible. This generally was though I thought the cafe scene in the casino was a little unlikely for Claire. I would have used the clips of naked Isabella in the office.

But a really good read. Very much enjoyed it and I will look at my compliance officer in a different way!

A bit too much back story, really.

A,A,C (Lot more experimentation involving the other couple, (Anal, Oral, Etc.))

Great story, enjoyed the read.

A,A,C (include Pascal & Veronique)

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with expansion on the lesbian theme

Last answer a, although perhaps a swap or group sex between the two couples would have worked also.

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and, I'd rather have just seen a proper swap between the 2 couples, and maybe some lesbian sex

I read all 8 in two days just couldnt stop. Keep it going my friend they were all great. Just for my personal taste dont let the men swap wifes but maybe the women can get together. I am not big on the cheating thing but my wife or claire showing to another man is huge turn on. Great work and please keep it going.

Gem

aaa Don't stop now...

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excellent story please send more

a, a, a (maybe a little extra fun): Enjoyed it all. Can't wait for their adventures as fugitives. Hope you haven't given up on writing. You're very good.

The fact of a fairly credible story line makes it much better than the straightforward suck-and-fuck type of story.

Personally, I'd much rather you keep the characters developing only slowly, basically in love with each other but with expanding horizons (in more ways than one?)

a,a, definitivly not c maybe they should start to screw ohers but it should go on slowly. They are in love with each others and dont wants to do hurt the other one.

I really loved your stories and check everyday for some updates :D

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I would have liked Claire to seduce a young French boy!

Response a, a, c

Well done, very complete. I loved the story line and think it really helps make the sex better. I want to know my characters!

More .... you cant leave them like that.