All Comments on 'A Trip Back Home Pt. 01'

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Boyd Percy 3 months ago

Good beginning!

lc69hunter 3 months ago

good start

AnnaValley11 3 months ago

Great start - looking forward to the next chapter

WantingToWriteGood 3 months ago

Very good start. Looking forward to more chapters.

muskyboy 3 months ago

Would have been a better story if she had been a virgin.

Anonymous2 months ago

How is "Cygne" pronounced? And "Cyg"?

I read Mr. Mento so I know you can write. Interested to see where you take this.

Barst0hBoy 2 months agoAuthor

Cygne = Sig-knee and Cyg = Sig.

Demosthenes384bc 2 months ago

Interesting, but I have no idea why Cygne would have a problem with his story. 4.6*

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