All Comments on 'A Trip Full of Discoveries'

Very hot! Loved it

Just one thing that's missing for me - exact details:

First, details of the storyteller.

Second, details of the storyteller's dick and experience.

Third,exact measurements of the lover - how tall is he? What was his his dick lick when he watched it soft? Is he cut? Is he hairy? Are his balls small or big? How many inches/cms is it when fully erect?

I can't wait for the continuation of this story, thanks for sharing :)

Love this story so far, I want more. I wish I was that lucky when I was younger.

Thanks to everyone for the feedback! Wow, I honestly never expected this story to blow up like this, I'm amazed!

@Anonymous you're right, I left out a lot of the details, partly because this was quite literally a draft and not an actual fully committed work, but also in a way to convey the "tunnel vision" that lust and desire give you: more circumstantial details (like precise height and length) I personally think would break the immersion, as if you were in that situation you probably wouldn't have a ruler. But I will definitely include details regarding foreskin, balls, hair and feature comparisons in the future! That is absolutely important to me as well, and I have to admit I just forgot about them. I'm happy you guys liked the story as a whole and want more of this, so I'll be continuing it, along with another Christmas related one I started writing, so stay tuned!

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