by sumfuninseattle
So good love the conflict that she has hope she has it for another chapter or two at least. Love Rich and her father in law degrading her and calling her names. Also loved every second of the story have enjoyed both chapters so far can’t wait for more excellent writing.
I'm torn between writing one, or two more chapters for this series. If you like it, and have any feelings about where to take things, feel free to let me know!
Hey, why dont we skip to the part where she hooks up with an abusive partner who routinely beats the shit out of her and puts her in the hospital before finally killing her and their kids in a fit of rage.
Isn’t that what we’re leading up to?
Love this genre - the more chapters you can put out of this quality, the better. Nice job!
This is hot! Becoming her father-in-law's personal cock-sleeve was a nice turn of events. Alice's compulsion to please others is powerful stuff and very likely to get her into all kinds of trouble. At least, I hope so! The father-in-law seems like the kind of fellow who would probably share Alice with his friends.
Oh god I need more of this series. It's so fucking hot watching her stuggle while submitting, and hearing it all from her point of view makes it even better!
If you were to continue, I suppose a typical story would detail a few more instances of Alice in free-fall. What will she be inclined to do now that she has a compulsive need to please? What else will Hillman add to her list of changes? Will her husband ask her to get big fake tits? Will her father-in-law knock her up? Will Rich start using her to close business deals with her body? This is a great story and I hope you'll share more tales of Alice's tumble.