All Comments on 'A Turn of Events Ch. 01'

Same old same old.

My wife and I have seduced a lot of women, it is always fun! Trick nowadays is the risk of STDs and AIDS. Small chance in white women is still a chance and needs to be taken care of.

really to simple to be good or erotic. had the feeling of sitting in a not to good restaurant and eating an average meal.

Both of the girls seemed like they would be anyone's wet dream girl. To have two girls that are more than just hot would be a total fantasy

I like your style very much- lust and evenly paced plus very graphically description of the sexual acts.Too good!

And very well-written.

A bit fast (no build-up or slow-down), but still nice.

A couple of whores with a dick.

Very good! Just the right mix of description and action. Concise and neat. More stories please!

Fun story. Five mixed drinks in an hour, for 120 lb. Women...makes a good story seem a little more like sex with someone unable to legally consent.