All Comments on 'A Unknowing Loving Step Mom'

for an American. Couldn't get past the first half page. Either that or it's badly written.

Either you're hella old or a foreigner because NO ONE uses colored/coloured anymore to describe black people (unless you're a racist or a bigot) and for the love of god get a damned editor because your story makes no damn sense! It's all over the place because of poor spelling, incorrect word choices, missing words, unneeded words and misused phrases (Ex: side blinded, what the hell is that?!? The correct term is blind sided!).

qualitywheat is one of the best here but this story does not belong in Incest/Taboo.

The point of the global taboo of incest is the risk of inbreeding.

A Step Mom/Step Son relationship is therefore NOT incest .

Surely you see that!

There are so many other categories where this story could fit right in but please not in Incest/Taboo.

Oh hell yeah! Hot story, needs more chapters, and an editor!

It goes all over the place and makes zero sense. Gave up a quarter way down the first page.

You wrote in the second paragraph of the beginning of your story that Jeremy was barely over 13 years old 6 ft tall and over 200lbs. Holy crap that kid developed early.

Disappointed. Get an editor.

Was expecting more about Helga then everyone else since it waz supposed to be about stepson sex

5 Stars!

Fuck, this is so fuckin' horny! There HAS to be at least one more chapter, please!